-
Check this out
This is something I wrote. Tell me what you think. It's a little psychotic, it doesn't really reflect on me though, I wrote it while I was frustrated about something. Think it's any good?
Your time will come to end
I'll give you your thorn crown
You think that your a martyr?
Upon you they all look down
I swear upon the clouds
That kingdom in the sky
By the time that I am done
I'll watch you, feel you die
So while I cast you up
Upon your pentragram
It's time you realise
Your soul it has been damned
His fury flows through me
When your subject crosses my mind
I swear on blood and bone
Revenge it will be mine
So enjoy it while you can
That life you swindled away
Because upon a pentagram
With Satan you will play
Soon I'll take your all
Leave you nothing dear
I'll find where you are
Destroy your life with fear
So go run and hide
The monster is now confined
It's chains may rust and carode
But his teeth are sharp as knives
You think you got away?
2 Years have come to pass
Still a lifetime to go
Someday I'll find your ass
Five months I've held it in
It's tearing me apart
Someday I will kill you
Bear handedly tear out your heart
This is who I am
Something dark and evil
I'll never take it back
Vengeance I must feel
-
Senior Member
Re: Check this out
Poetry?
Havent seen that on here for a long time.
-
Re: Check this out
Not bad... I am awful when it comes to poetry. Good Work
Posting Permissions
- You may not post new threads
- You may not post replies
- You may not post attachments
- You may not edit your posts
-
Forum Rules