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  1. #1
    MegaMan's Avatar
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    Check this out

    This is something I wrote. Tell me what you think. It's a little psychotic, it doesn't really reflect on me though, I wrote it while I was frustrated about something. Think it's any good?

    Your time will come to end
    I'll give you your thorn crown
    You think that your a martyr?
    Upon you they all look down

    I swear upon the clouds
    That kingdom in the sky
    By the time that I am done
    I'll watch you, feel you die

    So while I cast you up
    Upon your pentragram
    It's time you realise
    Your soul it has been damned

    His fury flows through me
    When your subject crosses my mind
    I swear on blood and bone
    Revenge it will be mine

    So enjoy it while you can
    That life you swindled away
    Because upon a pentagram
    With Satan you will play

    Soon I'll take your all
    Leave you nothing dear
    I'll find where you are
    Destroy your life with fear

    So go run and hide
    The monster is now confined
    It's chains may rust and carode
    But his teeth are sharp as knives

    You think you got away?
    2 Years have come to pass
    Still a lifetime to go
    Someday I'll find your ass

    Five months I've held it in
    It's tearing me apart
    Someday I will kill you
    Bear handedly tear out your heart

    This is who I am
    Something dark and evil
    I'll never take it back
    Vengeance I must feel

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    Re: Check this out

    Poetry?
    Havent seen that on here for a long time.

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    Re: Check this out

    Not bad... I am awful when it comes to poetry. Good Work

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