1st poem

[wayneo]

This world gone to hell everyones fighting so much h8 in the world how can u love it all u see is greed in the world that we all liveing we all need 2 wake up see what we all doing *****ing all seeing the bad side in people we know that we should should all try and get along or we just end up died or hurt in this world.

most people get hurt in this world over bull**** that shouldnt even start a fight alot of girls get beaten up by guys but only thing us guy should do is support and show love and that we care we cant blame them for what they did only thing u can do is stay or leave take ur hurt feeling with u at end of today thats all we got.

[wayneo]

tell me what u think pls / dont say dont 2x post whatever i know just didnt wanna ruin it

[weatherdog]

1: you should have separated it into lines instead of having run-on sentences.
2: its not that good i have to say.

[Matheusultimatex]

1: You double posted by like... The 100000th time.
2: You didn't censore swears.
3: You didn't read the rules.
Read the FKN rules HERE
And about the poem, put it in a poem format.
And i also think it's not that good.

[wayneo]

thats only thing u care about is rules stick them up ur ass dam

[Matheusultimatex]

You really want to get banned heh...

[SalamiNipples]

The poem sucks.
And grow up kid. Your spelling is down IN your ass. So don't go flaming on other members when you can't follow a couple of rules or have average grammar.

[Matheusultimatex]

Yeah, poodle is right.
It doesn't rhyme as far as i see.
BTW wayneo, looks like it's you that got metal up your 4$$. (Oh, the Metallica irony)
I request a lock now.

[Soewut]

That's not a poem. It's just 2 short paragraphs. Poems have stanzas, yours does not.

Have to disagree with you one that, poets can do whatever they want .

It doesn't rhyme as far as i see.

It doesn't have to rhyme.

Anyways, don't double post, you are going to end up being banned. Also, don't post stuff, such as poetry, unless you are serious about it.

[SalamiNipples]

That's not a poem. It's just 2 short paragraphs. Poems have stanzas, yours does not.

Have to disagree with you one that, poets can do whatever they want .

Anyways, don't double post, you are going to end up being banned.

It was a ballpark guess.