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    Re: Autumn War

    Chapter 4
    The History

    Under current work

    EDIT: Completed

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    Cool story,if you ant me to help you have totell me how many chapter's there are

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    Cool Once you finished post all this story in anorther topic for people to read =D Addicting story though I still wanna read more xD
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    yeah VERY ADDICING

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    [color=#FF0000]AUTUMN WAR[/color]



    Chapter 1: The Prologue

    "Alright, there's one left guys. Who wants it?" I said as I looked into the scope of my sniper. The team groaned with annoyance once they heard my statement. "Just take him out yourself, Josh" cried one of them. So I glared into the scope, lined up the cross-marks on the approaching zombie, steadied my aim, slowly pulled the trigger. "BAAM!" made the sound of the sniper as my bullet went right through its head and ended with splattering sound of its organs and flesh falling on the ground.

    We all lined up at the edge of the school rooftop and glanced at the battlefield that laid under us. The grounds of it were scattered with bodies of zombies and flooded with the blood of them.I ordered, "Give me a status check now! Count all supplies and the number of those son-of-*****es that we've killed in the past half hour! Is that clear squad?" "Sir yes sir!" they replied back. I sat down as the squad moved around to obey my orders. However, the more I tired to relax, the more stressed I would get. Yet, I never will be be able to sleep or relax again; not till the past stops clouding my mind. My squad has told me so many times that it wasn't my fault for what happened, but deep inside...I knew it was.

    All of the sudden, some object fell down from the sky and headed towards me. I stood still, frozen with fear. And so, the object struck me on the head, and everything went black after that.


    Autumn War Chapter 2: The Beginning

    I woke up and found myself sitting in a chopper. I glanced around and saw my entire squad, both Alpha and Bravo. The chopper landed on the plains in front of the place we were supposed to search; some high school named "South Ridge", which I just snickered under my breath. Then pilot commanded us to jump out of the chopper, which we hopped out and ran to the crashed cars that were piled in front of the school. "Captain, do you copy? This is Cobra. Do you read me over?" said the voice in my earset communicator. I spoke in reply, "This is Captain to Cobra, I hear you you loud and clear, over." My squad kept getting impenitent as they waited for the next order to be made. "Alright Captain, we need to go refuel so extraction will arrive in 3 hours, you have till then to retrieve the package and arrive in the landing zone, over" said the voice. "Three hours? That's hardly anything!!" I thought to myself. However, I just sighed restlessly and responded back,

    "Roger that Cobra. See ya at the LZ, over." And then we heard the blades of the chopper spinning again, looked back, and saw it leaving the scene. "Three hours??!" That's some bull**** right there Captain, sir" angrily said Esa. I replied back, "No poo, but lets just get this over with." I signaled second squad to move out and start heading for the school. They slowly paced towards the building with their weapons aiming around to bring some light around the darkness with the flashlights that were attached to them. As they reached the first cover they gave the signal for us to move out as well.

    We slowly started securing the area till we all got to the first building of the school. I peeked into the window and saw nothing but darkness and maybe a couple of things that were turned over. "So what the hell is this 'package', sir?" asked Mark. "I'm not sure, but it's a little girl, I believe, in the need of rescue. I think it's a daughter for one of X-Corp's scientists. Anyway X-Corp believes she got trapped here during the T-virus outbreak" I said. "A little girl!?! Lets hurry up and rescue her then!" Amber screeched. The rest of the squad snickered softly while some groaned in annoyance.

    I slowly went up to her and I could easily see she had tears in her eyes. "Amber, I know the past is killing you, but there wasn't anything you could have done to save your kids from the gang. However, you'll soon enough get revenge, but for now concentrate on the mission" I said to her. "Thanks Captain" she said as she wiped her eyes and smiled. Suddenly, shadows appeared and surrounded us. The shadows started to come closer, "Arm yourself squad!" I yelled. And so the squad grabbed hold of their weapons that were strapped around them and aimed toward the shadows. Then, one of the shadows stepped into the light of out flashlights. Yet, what we saw was one of the things that we would forever be haunted by; mentally and physically. There stood a human being with torn clothes that were stained and splattered with blood from all the open blood-spurring wounds it had on himself. "Hold your fire!" I ordered. Esa slowly started walking towards it. "Esa! Get your ass back in line!" I yelled at him. "Captain, I'm just trying to see what he is." "That's an order!!"

    However, the thing tried to attack him and I quickly acted and ordered the squad to shoot it. As we shot it, the other shadows suddenly came closer to us even faster. More of those "things" appeared into the light and attempted to attack us as well. "Fall back! I repeat, fall back! I screamed to my squad. And so, my squad kicked down the doors of the building and we ran into the darkness with the "things" following us. As we ran, we suddenly heard a scream from behind us. We turned around and placed our lights into where we heard it come from, which then our hearts dropped as we saw the horrific scene. There laid on Ricardo being grabbed, bitten, and sliced by those inhuman things. "Captain!! Those things gotta be zombies, sir!" yelled someone behind me. "Zombies?? You've gotta be ****ing me" I said, "alright squad! Shoot for their heads!! Ricardo hang on!"

    As Ricardo punched and shake the zombies off we tried to shoot them till we were close enough to pull him out. "Cmon! Move before they get us!" yelled Steven. However, it was too late, and we were cornered from both sides of the hall. "Captain in here!" yelled Mark as he pointed to an open door he found. We all stormed in and slammed the door behind us. "Put him on that table now!" I yelled as I closely listened to the zombies piling up on the door. We laid Ricardo on the table and were trying patch the wounds from the zombie encounter. "We are losing him! Too much blood loss Captain!" said somebody in the squad. "muck! God dammit soldier, stay with me! Jesus Christ...." I said as we all tried to save him. However, it was too late to save him and so, died. We glanced at his body helplessly and felt crushed for our fallen comrade. Yet, I could see a couple of tears falling on the ground from some of the fellow soldiers in the squad. "...Umm..Alpha go stand by the door and guard it. Bravo try to find some exit around here but make sure no one leaves this room, not till you find that exit. Is that clear squad?" I commanded. "Sir, yes sir." they mumbled softly.

    I slowly walked next to Ricardo's body. I yanked off his dogtag and searched through his pockets to find the "KIA" papers. I finally found it after a couple of minutes of looking through them. I opened it up and smeared some of his blood on it. This was standard procedure in assuring that a comrade was killed in action, or "KIA". I turned my back to glance at his dogtag, which then the T-Virus infection began to diverse through Ricardo's lifeless body. The virus began dividing and multiplying as it replaced cells with copes of itself. However, its main purpose was fulfilled once it finally reached the brain and heart. The virus restored them but changed Ricardo's body completely. The person that was once an amazing person, became a blood-thisrty, mindless, and aggresive zombie. The zombie rose from the table and looked around the room for food, which spotted me first. he suddenly grabbed me by the head and laid me on the table. He quickly launched his head towards my shoulder for a clean bite. Yet, I grabbed his head and thrusted him away from me, which then he tripped over a chair. As he tried to get up, i grabbed my pistol and aimed it in front of his face. He opened his mouth to growl at me, but instead I shoved the pistol in it and pulled the trigger.

    The squad quickly looked back to see what happened. They saw tears coming down from my eyes as it mixed with the blood that spluttered onto my face. I glanced back at them and stared into their eyes, All I could see was fear and sadness.


    Chapter 3- The Biohazard

    "Sir, what now?" asked somebody. I turned back as I was gathering my items that fell when I was attacked. "What? Oh....Well Alpha Squad One keep covering that door, the rest follow me. We are going to try to find a way out of this building." So Squad One stayed behind as the rest and I moved through the back door. "Alright guys, keep watch and stay on guard" I advised. As soon as we stepped into the hallway all we could see was darkness. Suddenly, there came a groaning voice from in front of us. "Lights up squad!" I yelled. Everyone quickly increased the light on their weapons, which they kept swinging their guns around as the groaning got louder in the hallway."Where the muck are they?!?!" screamed the squad. Then slowly the noise stopped. "Why did it stop all of the sudden. I mean they were ****ing --..." yelled Clint, but was interrupted when the zombies broke down the doors and fell upon him. "Clint!" yelled Amber, as the zombies crawled on top of him. The squad kept firing and trying to pull Amber as she attempted to rescue Clint, but we couldn't have done anything to help. As we ran down the hall, more zombies tried in attempt to try to grab us. However, we suddenly realized that we reached dead end. "muck! Captain, I don't want to die, at least not like this!" screamed someone behind me. "Look! It's an elevator!" exclaimed Mark. "Alright squad! Hold this position! Mark switch the elevator!" I commanded. We kept firing as the zombies got closer to us, but finally the elevator reached before it was too late. The elevator doors swung open and we poured ourselves in. Yet, one zombie grabbed one of the squad members' arm; it was the new guy Chris. "No! Pull me back in!" he yelled as more zombies yanked on his arm. We caught ourselves in a battle of trying to pull Chris in, but then was interrupted, when the elevator doors swung closed and crushed Chris's arm and ripped it off. The zombies were left with another meal, while we got screaming and horror. Chris kept flipping his arm around as blood spurted out and screaming in pain. However, others were screaming in horror as well.

    My head filled with all the screaming in the elevator, and so I puled out my pistol, cocked it, and shot Chris in the head. Everything else went silent. The squad stared at me with fear. "muck! Jesus Chris! You people are soldiers! not helpless kids! So straighten up now and act like the soldiers you were ****ing trained to be!" I yelled. "Sir, yes sir!" they replied back. Then, the elevator came to a stop, and the doors opened slowly with a creak. We raised our guns as we stepped into the dark room. We were slowly roaming the room when unexpectedly the floor made a small beeping noise. The whole squad aimed their guns to the floor as the noise got louder and spread through the room, but then stopped when a small light turned on behind us. The light showed a tiny sign that said 'WARNING:BIOHAZARD ROOM".

    "Captain, why the hell do you think they call this a biohazard room? asked Esa. "I'm not sure, but I don't think I want to find out..." I replied back. However, I knew inside we were soon to lean why, when a voice came over us. It was a computer voice that said, "Floor lights activated" and then the floor became bright as the tiles across the room turned on as well. Despite the fact that we had a better chance of survival now, our hope was once crushed again. We started to hear the moaning sounds of the zombies again, as the sound got louder and spread through the room. I slowly raised my head and glanced around me and saw a glass plane on each side of the room and behind it, stood tons of zombies as they clawed hit the glass. "Whatever you do," I said,"do not shoot the glass." The squad and I started to slowly walk across the room with full caution and our guns raised to the zombies' heads. All of the sudden, we heard a cracking noise behind us, and so we quickly turned around to see that he zombies already penetrated the glass causing for both glasses to be filed with cracks. I yelled to the squad as the sound of the glass breaking filled the room, "Fall back! Run to the door!"

    We ran to the door as we shot the zombies hat fell onto the floor."muck! It's jammed sir!" cried Steven after attempting to open the door."Squad Bravo! Set up a defense position and hold no matter what! Eric hack the door now!" And so the orders were done, Eric ran to the keypad in attempt to open it, Bravo shooting the zombies, and Alpha helping as well. However, I just stood there zoning out and helplessly looking at my fellow comrades fearing for their lives, yet I was interrupted when Eric ran in front of me and shook me as he called me, "Captain! Captain! Sir, the door opened! Wake up sir!" he yelled. I zoned back and moved quickly realized what he just said. "Alpha into the room! Bravo hold off a bit longer!" I commanded the squad, and in a flash the squad ran inside with me behind them and Eric."Bravo come in! Eric get ready to hack again to close the doors! Alpha set up a defense perimeter till Bravo gets in! Now soldiers!" I yelled. Quickly, Bravo began to run inside, however I looked back out and saw Mike and John still holding their position. "John! Mike! Get in now!" cried Amber.

    "We are coming! Come on Mike! replied John. They began to sprint to the door when suddenly the door closed right in front of them, causing them to crash with it. "Ohhh, ouch! That must have hurt!" said someone behind me. "Mike! John! Can you hear me?" I asked them. "Yeah, we can hear you sir." they replied as the grunted from the pain. "Good, now hold that position while Eric tried to open the door! I told them. "No problem! These zombies are way too easy" replied Mike. I slowly walked to Eric with a glare on my face. "Why the hell did you close the door on them?!? I told you specifically not to close it till both of them were inside!" I yelled at him. "Sir, I didn't do anything I swear!" he argued back. "So you are telling me that the doors closed by themselves?" I questioned him angrily. "I don't know sir. All I know is that I didn't do it" he said.

    Suddenly the room was filled with light and on the other side of the room laid a desk filled with computer monitors and keyboards. "Alpha and Bravo, go guard the doors in this room" I said as I glanced into one of the monitors that turned on. There in the monitor, it showed Mike and John standing in the other room as they kicked random bodies of the zombies'. "Well now we know they are okay" said Eric as he sat in the chair All of the sudden, the same voice was back, but said a different and haunting message. "T-Virus Infection Activated!" stated the voice, which then the room where Mike and Johnson were began to be filled with a gas. The gas kept spreading through the room as they slammed on the door and yelled for help. "No! Eric try t open the door now!" I screamed to him, as I gripped the desk tightly. I tried to keep my eyes of the monitor but I just had to see how this infection can begin. However the monitor showed nothing but the gas as we heard the screams getting lower slowly. Finally after a few seconds, the screaming stopped and the door opened. The gas was gone but left my two comrades lying on the floor dead. The squad glanced at me as I stood by their bodies. Suddenly, Mike and John quickly got up, growled at me, and went full charge towards me. I just slowly pulled p my pistol and shot them in the face.
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    Why did you copy the story

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    so it could all be in one post
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    Oh

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    Thanks VG king! Once its all done I will post all this in anorther topic and maybe stick it cause its a awsome story =D
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    Re: Autumn War

    yeah

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