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"If I'm not back in five minutes... just wait longer."
Ace Ventura: Pet Detective (1994)
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rofl, well i got 7 and if u count pantries as ones 2, then i got 9 XD
but anyway guyz, im almost done with chapter 5
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awsome i wanna read it..
"If I'm not back in five minutes... just wait longer."
Ace Ventura: Pet Detective (1994)
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can wait to read it
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its here guyz
Autumn War
Chapter 5- The Small Passage
Chapter 5 -
"Everyone! Lights up!" I yelled, and in a second every person turned the flashlights on their weapons. We stood there silently, crouched on the floor, just waiting for some sign to give us hope. Suddenly, the ear communicator started to make a small static sound. I hit the switch on the communicator and began attempting to see if I can get something other than the buzzing sound. "Can someone read me? This is Captain Relic, Ghost Squadron, 7th Platoon! Can someone read me! Over!" I screamed into the communicator. However, there came a small voice that I could hardly tell what it was saying. I increased the volume and then suddenly yelled in agony as a high pitch sound went through my ear. "Ahh, ****..****..." I groaned. "Captain are you alright sir?" asked Esa as he rushed to pick me up. "Yeah..just my ear, damn that hurt" I replied. However, the pain went away as I unexpectedly started to hear someone talking back in the communicator. "Captain do you read me? This is Rex. Cobra wasn't able to make it, got routes changed. How you guys doing down there? Have you received the package? Over." asked the voice.
"No, we haven't gotten the package. Just get us out of here please. You are just going to have to get another squadron to do this mission. I've already lost too many men on this mission.Over." I stated. "How? I mean, it's just en empty place. I see no other life other than you 16 on my radar." he replied. Then suddenly it came to me, and I froze. "How many did you say there were Rex?" I questioned. "Umnmm, 16. Why?" Rex said. I mumbled to the squad, "Head Count..." "Wait what Captain?" they asked all confused. "Head count now!" I raged, and then quickly they began to count. "1!" yelled Eric, followed by Esa "2!", and then Steven "3!", all the way to me which I finished with a tremble in my voice "10......" Then the sounds of the zombies returned again, but this time they were closer and much louder. "Captain! What do we do?! They are in this room!" screamed someone beside me. "Ahhhhhh!" screamed Amber, and we quickly turned our guns to where the scream came from. Then, things again began to turn into more horror. There on the floor was Amber as the other 6 zombies piled on top of her and began feasting on her flesh. "Ohh ****! Nooo!! Amber!" bellowed Esa. He started to rush to Amber, but we suddenly pushed him down to the ground and dragged him away from her. "Nooo! Let me go! Amber!! No!! I've gotta save her! Amber! AMBER!!" Esa yelled as he wept from the sight of his girlfriend being killed and eaten. "Alpha Squad 2 take them out and including Amber. Bravo Squad secure the perimeter, and make sure no more damn zombies get in here." I ordered. And so they began to move to their positions as Eric and I held Esa down. Yet Esa, kept struggling more and more as Alpha got closer to shooting Amber. Then suddenly after killing all the zombies, Alpha stood over Amber as she laid there helplessly in pain. She began to speak when all of the sudden Alpha shot her in the mouth and in the head and started to shoot all over her body as well. And so Esa kept attempting more to struggle free but Eric and I held him down. He began crying more as Alpha slowly walked up to him and put their hands on his shoulders.
"Okay, Esa. If I let you go, do you promise you won't do anything psychotic or crazy?" I asked him, and he replied back with a slow nod. And so I nodded back to Eric and we both let him go slowly. However Esa just got up and charged at the Alpha Squad with full rage, but yet again Eric and I slammed him down to the ground and pinned him. "How could you the hell do this to my girlfriend you assholes!!?? How could you!?!" he yelled at Alpha as he tried to free himself. "What? I'm sorry! I had to kill her or else she would have been become a zombie. Plus I was just following orders." yelled Juan. "Oh yeah? Well that's another thing you Latinos follow then. I bet you if I roll a quarter down the street you ****ing Latinos would make a parade just by chasing it." hollered Esa."You take that back you piece of ****.!" Juan yelled as he and I tried to get a punch on him but Steven and Mark pulled us back. "In fact you know what's the difference between black people and a bucket full of ****? The bucket you asshole." laughed Juan.
Yet again, Esa squirmed around to free himself. "Enough of this!" I ordered, "Let me go soldier. Don't worry I'm calm. Now I want you two to get your selves straight or else we are leaving you here!" Esa and Juan looked at each other with their faces full of anger. "Alright, sir. Sorry sir." they said. "Captain, I've reached the school and landed right next to your squad's positions. Where the hell are you guys, I don't see you out here, over." stated Rex. "We are underground, Rex. Where is your position on ground level? Over." I replied to him."I'm not sure, but I think it's the courtyard for the school." he said. "Alright we are coming to you, over and out" I finally stated. "Okay guys, we are finally heading home, let's get the **** out of this hell hole." I rejoiced. "Hoohaw!" they all replied back. We began our walk again through the darkness into another room. However, this time it was a smaller room with tons of desks and stands. Yet, on top of desks and stands where jars filled with some liquid. I picked one up as we continued through the room. I began to examine it and freaked out when I saw that there was a human head in it, and suddenly a jar fell and broke behind us. The squad turned around and saw nothing. "360 Degree Defense squadron!" I yelled. And so the squad began to form a circle as they walked through the room with me in front of them. We came to a stop when I spotted some large containers that contained zombies in it. However, they were floating in the liquid that was in there with an underwater mask on their face. "Sir, I see a vent! Maybe if we take the vent system we can get up to the ground floor!" stated Steven. "Good idea soldier, go open it. The rest of the squadron protect him." I ordered the squad. As they moved to the vent system I stayed with the zombie. I kept glancing at him, and so decided to tap on the glass plane with my gun. I was about to tap it again when suddenly, the sounds of zombies again started to come everywhere. "Squad hold that position no matter what! Do you hear ---" yet I was interrupted when a zombie charged out of the dark shadows, slammed me down to the ground, and pulled me into the shadows as well. He began to attempt to bite me but I kept struggling as I held head away from me. Then I brought my knees up to his chin, which stunned him. Giving me enough time to get him off me. And so I slammed my boots onto his chest and caused him to crash with the wall. I took my pistol out and shot him in the face.
"Captain are you alright?" asked someone as I began to step into the light that was given off from the container that held the zombie. "Yeah, no bites so don't worry." I replied. "Alright that's good sir. We have opened the vent system, Alpha and half of Bravo are already in the vent system. We are waiting for you sir." replied Esa. "Okay, just keep going in, Rex is trying to send a transmission right now." I hit the switch on the communicator once again "Rex, something going on?" I asked him. "**** Captain, there are civilians here. However they are all bloody and ****. They are a mess. Hold on I'm going to tell them everything is fine." Rex stated. "Rex! Don't! Get back in the chopper! Rex!" Dammit" I yelled. Yet, I noticed he left his communicator on and began to listen. "Don't worry, everything is fine. We are on a mission from X-Corp sent to get a girl. Have you seen this little girl? Hey don't grab me! What the hell? Ahhh!! AHHHH!!!" and the transmission dropped. "****!" I yelled. Suddenly, the lights in the room turned on and I looked back and saw the reason why. There on the wall, was the body of the zombie that attempted to kill me, however his body hit the switch when I kicked him into the wall. It caused me to smile a little. Yet, I lost the frown once I saw what was on both sides of the room. There stood about a dozen of zombies on each side, just waiting for me to move. I glanced at the open vent system and back at the zombies. I then began to run which the zombies acted quickly and began to charge to me as well. However I jumped towards the vent and began to slide on the floor, hoping for me to fit through, but then suddenly the lights went out and the room filled with the moaning of the zombies again.
EDIT: Spelling and grammar correction
chapter 6 under curent work
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Ryu talk with vking give him the whole chapter 6 and have him put the whole thing in 1 post then post it and i will stiky it and if u have anymore chapters u can add on but please dont double post its a site No.No
Someone got an 11 killstreak so I must come back.
and man dont worry about the swears that much it sounds better with them in
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